Friday, September 25, 2020

"Close Your Eyes "

 

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"Close Your Eyes"
Greg Budig 2020

Close your eyes. 

They are no 

longer needed. 

Your remaining senses 

are still open inside. 

Sounds become visual. 

Scents become images. 

Lay in the darkness 

and see. 


A train sounds it's horn 

from a far away crossing.

It's engines drone closer,

grinding steel on steel tracks. 

Red lights flash as the 

crossing arm lowers. 

Sounds become visual. 

In your mind 

you can see. 


Raindrops splatter 

on dusty dry pavement. 

The sweetness of moisture 

has scented the air. 

Breathing in deeply to

olfactory sensors. 

Scents become images. 

The rain glistens 

inside. 


To look without seeing,

hear without listening. 

and touch without 

feeling are so easy to do. 

Close your eyes in 

the darkness. 

Open up all your senses. 

Be at peace in the quiet. 

Listen to the breeze. 


The night wind rustles 

the twisted, aged maple. 

The soft breeze dances 

with it's velvet soft leaves. 

You can hear them so clearly.  

Taste the greenness of nature. 

The image becomes clearer 

in your now open mind. 

Close your eyes. 


The End 








2 comments:

  1. Nice ! Reminds me somewhat of a passage from Juan Mascaró's Tao Te Ching:

    "Without taking a step outdoors
    You know the whole world;
    Without taking a peep out the window
    You know the colour of the sky.
    The more you experience,
    The less you know.
    The sage wanders without knowing,
    Sees without looking,
    Accomplishes without acting"

    George Harrison based a Beatles song on this which is how I'm familiar with it.

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  2. Thank you!
    I sometimes need to get into a state of meditation to find what I want or need to say.
    This piece started with just a random thought of expression in my head. After writing it down, I then needed to follow the train of thought and see where it goes.
    Sometimes I am not to sure how it will end up, but typically I have been finding the title of the piece at the very end.
    Thank you for commenting!!
    Feedback is always appreciated!

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